問題詳情：
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文*有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字元號(^),並在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除:把多餘的詞用斜線()劃掉。
修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,並在該詞下面寫出修改後的詞。
注意:1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2. 只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。
As the coming of skiing competition in our school , we decided to practice skiing. Last sunday, my classmates and I got together at the school gate. In the early morning, leading by Ms Li, we went there by bus. On the bus we sang some popular songs and play some games as well. Then we told some instructions on how to ski safe. It took us half a hour to arrive. On changing our clothes, we couldn’t wait it to ski on the snow. We were black and blue because of many fall. The sun set after we knew it. Although we were tired and hungry, we were exciting.
【回答】
the coming of skiing competition in our school , we decided to practice skiing. Last Sunday, my classmates and I got together at the school gate. In the early morning, 
by Ms Li, we went there by bus. On the bus we sang some popular songs and 
some games as well. Then we 
told some instructions on how to ski 
. It took us half 
hour to arrive. On changing our clothes, we couldn’t wait it to ski on the snow. We were black and blue because of many 
. The sun set 
we knew it. Although we were tired and hungry, we were 
.
解析： 1．as→ with．考查介詞．表示"隨着…"，as是連詞，引導一個伴隨情況狀語從句；此處後面是名詞詞組，應用介詞with．故將as改爲with． 2．leading→ led．考查動詞形式．動詞lead（帶領）與主語we之間爲動賓關係，應用過去分詞形式作方式狀語，故將leading改爲led． 3．play→ played．考查時態．本文整體時態爲一般過去時，本句敘述我們在坐車去滑雪場時的動作，所以此處應與前面動詞sang時態一致，用過去式．故將play改爲playing． 4．told前加were．考查語態．主語we與動詞tell之間爲被動關係，應用被動語態be+過去分詞，結合整體時態及主語we，be動詞用were，故在told前加were． 5．safe→ safely．考查副詞．此處作狀語修飾動詞ski，應用副詞safely．故將safe改爲safely． 6．a→ an．考查冠詞．hour的首字母音爲元音音素，前面應加不定冠詞an，故將a改爲an． 7．去掉it．考查固定用法．can't/couldn't wait to do sth．迫不急待地想做某事，固定表達，wait後面接不定式，故去掉it． 8．fall→ falls．考查名詞的數．fall這裏的含義是"意外摔倒"，可數名詞，前面有many修飾，所以用複數形式．故將fall改爲falls． 9．after→ before．考查句意．本句的意思是：不知不覺中太陽已經落山了，表示"不知不覺"，應用before we knew it．故將after改爲before． 10．exciting→ excited．考查形容詞．exciting令人興奮的，表示事物本身所具有的*質或特徵；此處主語是we，表達人對事物的感受，應用形容詞excited（興奮的），故將exciting改爲excited．
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題型：短文改錯
