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共享單車在蘇州投入使用以來,給人們帶來了諸多便利,受到人們的追捧,改變了人們的出行方式,但同時也遇到了一些挑戰...

共享單車在蘇州投入使用以來,給人們帶來了諸多便利,受到人們的追捧,改變了人們的出行方式,但同時也遇到了一些挑戰,是國民素質的"照妖鏡",請你根據表格中資訊的提示,給21世紀英文報寫一篇關於共享單車看法的稿件。

社會現狀

自從出現,飽受讚譽。

諸多優勢

1. 有益健康,減少污染

2. 費用不高,負擔得起

3. (自擬一條)

存在問題

1. 未及時歸還

2. (自擬一條)

你的觀點

我認爲*要鼓勵人們正確使用共享單車。

要求:

1.詞數90左右 (開頭已給出,不計入總詞數)。

2.短文應包括所給內容要點,可適當發揮。

3.語句通順,意思連貫,書寫工整。

Bike-sharing

Shared-bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. ___________________________________

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【回答】

【參考範文】

Bike-sharing

Shared-bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.

It has many advantages. First of all, using shared-bikes is not only good for health, but also less pollution. Secondly, it is not expensive and people can afford it. In a word, it brings a lot of convenience to people, which is pursued by people and changes the way people travel.

But shared-bikes also have some challenges. Some people can’t return it in time. Some do not cherish it, causing serious damage to the shared-bike.

I think the government should encourage people to use shared-bikes properly.

【寫作亮點】

1.題幹解讀:本題要求寫對共享單車的看法,屬於議論文寫作。作者開篇就明確共享單車的優勢和好處;然後筆鋒一轉介紹使用中存在的問題;最後表明觀點,提出使用建議。

2.例文點評:這篇習作是"分總式"結構。本文時態是一般現在時,主要以第三和第一人稱展開論述,觀點明確,內容充實,結構完整,表達條理,是一篇優秀的習作。

3.高分亮點:

短語:more and more popular, in daily life, first of all, be good for, not only…but also, in a word, a lot of, in time, encourage sb. do sth.

句型:First of all, using shared-bikes is not only good for health, but also less pollution.(非謂語動詞結構)

It is not expensive and people can afford it.(並列結構)

In a word, it brings a lot of convenience to people, which is pursued by people and changes the way people travel.(定語從句)

I think the government should encourage people to use Shared-bikes properly.(賓語從句)

知識點:其他

題型:書面表達

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