問題詳情：
上週末，你和同學參加了一次採摘活動。請你爲班級英語角寫一篇短文，介紹這次活動，內容包括:
1. 農場情況；
2. 採摘過程；
3. 個人感受
注意:
1. 詞數100左右；
2. 題目已爲你寫好。
題目:My Weekend
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【回答】
My Weekend
Organized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. The farm is situated at the foot of a mountain, the sky is blue and the air is fresh. We were attracted by the beautiful scenery. There are different kinds of fruit trees as well as a variety of animals.
On arriving, we saw red ripe peaches hanging on the tree. Using baskets and ladders, We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and soft. I couldn’t wait to take a bite, and the sweet juice went down my throat.
I was grateful for this opportunity to get close to nature. Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness!
【解析】
【詳解】第一步：根據提示可知，上週末，你和同學參加了一次採摘活動。請你爲班級英語角寫一篇短文，介紹這次活動。內容包括： 1. 農場情況； 2. 採摘過程； 3. 個人感受。
第二步：根據寫作要求確定關鍵詞（組），如：pick peaches, is situated, beautiful scenery, fruit trees ,a variety of animals, Using baskets and ladders, take a bite, be grateful for, get close to nature, feast on the sweetness.
第三步：根據提示和關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態問題。本文用一般現在時和一般過去時。
第四步：連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接和過渡，書寫一定要規範清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。
【點睛】範文內容完整，語言規範，語篇連貫，詞數適當。作者在範文中使用了較多進階表達方式，如 Organized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. 和Using baskets and ladders運用了非謂語動詞；We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and soft. 運用了定語從句；Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness!運用了連詞not only…but…和倒裝句。全文中沒有*式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，層次分明，上下句轉換自然，爲文章增*添*。
知識點：提綱作文
題型：書面表達
