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假設你是紅星中學高三(1)班學生李歡,請根據以下四幅圖的先後順序,寫一篇英文日記,記錄你班同學上週六參觀*科學院的全過程。

注意:詞數不少於60.

提示詞:*科學院 Chinese Academy of Sciences

假設你是紅星中學高三(1)班學生李歡,請根據以下四幅圖的先後順序,寫一篇英文日記,記錄你班同學上週六參觀*科...

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One possible version:

Last Saturday, my classmates and I went to the Chinese Academy of Sciences, which was a precious chance/golden opportunity to get close to science.

The moment we arrived at the Chinese Academy of Sciences, we were warmly greeted by a friendly expert standing at the entrance. Excited and happy, we clapped our hands and everyone was eager to explore the amazing scientific world. To have a better understanding of daily basic science, we attended a professional lecture themed Life and Water. A professor introduced the topic in such great detail that we all gave full attention and took a lot of notes.

The highlight of the visit was the hands-on experience in the science lab. Under the guidance of the expert, we got involved in a medical experiment with great care and enthusiasm. Observing the samples through the microscope, we, for the first time, got to know how anti-cancer drugs were developed and what awesome achievements our hardworking scientists had made. We also felt proud of the medical progress of our country.

Before we left, we invited the expert to take a group photo with us as a reminder of the fantastic visit, everyone wearing a big smile. Through the meaningful activity, we all agree that science plays an important role in our life and we will study hard to take advantage of it to make our world a better place.

解析:寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟:

1. 認真審題,找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句,確定中心思想.

2. 依據關鍵句,草擬提綱,梳理文章的脈絡

3. 準確定位人稱、時態.注意使用進階詞彙和進階句型使文章顯得更有檔次.

4.最後還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況,有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等

高分句型一:Last Saturday, my classmates and I went to the Chinese Academy of Sciences, which was a precious chance/golden opportunity to get close to science.

本句是which引導的非限定*定語從句;

意爲: 上週六,我和我的同學去了*科學院,這是一個接近科學的寶貴機會/黃金機會.

高分句型二:A professor introduced the topic in such great detail that we all gave full attention and took a lot of notes.

本句是that引導的定語從句;

意爲: 一位教授如此詳細地介紹了這個話題,以至於我們都給予了充分的關注,並做了很多筆記.

知識點:圖畫作文

題型:書面表達

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