问题详情：
There are advantage for students to work while studying at school. One of them was that they can earn money. For the most part, students working to earn money for his own use. Earning their own money allow them to spend on anything as they please，that can give them a sense of achievement. They will not have to ask their parents for money or for permission to do things by the money. Some students may also to save up for their college or future use. In this way, they know that it is importance to be independent. Therefore, I strong support this idea.
【回答】
1. advantage—advantages 2. was—is 3. working—work ---their
5. allow—allows 6. that---which 7. by–with 8. to去掉
9. importance—important （或者名词前加of） 10. strong----strongly
知识点：其他
题型：短文改错
