問題詳情:
現在的科技日新月異,各種發明以及高科技產品成爲了我們生活中不可缺少的一部分,如電腦、筆記本電腦(laptop)、手機(mobile phone)、平板電腦(iPad)、數碼相機(digital camera)等。請結合自己的經歷來描述你最喜歡的一種發明,以及你喜歡該發明的理由。
要求:1. 詞數不少於80詞;
2. 文中不得出現真實的人名、校名。
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【寫作思路】
考生要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題,確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態。首先要闡明自己的觀點,選擇自己最喜歡的一種發明,然後根據英文要點提示,闡述喜歡這種發明的理由,時態以一般現在時和一般過去時爲主,同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞,使文章具有一定的連貫*。溫馨提醒:考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況,有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。
【參考範文】
Among all the modern inventions, laptop is my favorite one. I think it is the most amazing invention in the 21st century.
With a laptop, I can work, study and entertain everywhere. A laptop can enable me to get the latest information whenever I want. Besides, I can keep in touch with my friends and family through e-mail and QQ at any time and in any place.
I used to study in a faraway place, so I always felt lonely and missed my family and friends very much. But since I got my laptop, I could chat with them and even see them every day.
I really like my laptop. I think in the future, everybody will have his or her own laptop.
【寫作亮點】
重點短語:Among all the modern inventions 在所有的現代發明中;get the latest information 獲取最新消息;get to the Internet 上網。
高分句型:
1. I think it is the most amazing invention in the 21 st century. 我認爲它是21世紀最讓人感到驚異的發明. (I think後面跟賓語從句)
2. I can keep in touch with my friends and family through e-mails and QQ at any time and in any place 我可以透過電子郵件和QQ隨時隨地於朋友家人保持聯繫。(keep in touch with和…保持聯繫)
知識點:其他
題型:書面表達