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假如你校最近就“家長應該如何對待孩子”的問題進行了調查,結果如下。請根據圖表1中提供的資訊描述調查結果,並針對...

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假如你校最近就“家長應該如何對待孩子”的問題進行了調查,結果如下。請根據圖表1中提供的資訊描述調查結果,並針對圖表2中的一個數據所反映的情況表達你的看法。

假如你校最近就“家長應該如何對待孩子”的問題進行了調查,結果如下。請根據圖表1中提供的資訊描述調查結果,並針對...

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【寫作指導】 這是一篇典型的圖表類作文。要求準確地表述調查結果並表達自己的看法。在寫作時應注意:(1)正確使用分數的表達法;(2)時態應以一般現在時爲主;(3)分層次敘述,分爲喜歡和不喜歡兩個方面;(4)句式要複雜多樣,可使用各類從句來表達。

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Recently our school has conducted a survey among the students about how parents should treat their children.

According to Chart 1, three kinds of behavior from parents are considered the most welcome by the students. 33.5% of the students feel happy that their parents trust them, laying a solid foundation for family communication. 31.7% are content to be in the equal position with their parents when they are talking with each other. What's more, 22.7% feel happy to receive constant praise or encouragement from their parents.

As is shown in Chart 2, 32% of the students think their parents expect too much of them, especially in their studies, putting great pressure on them. Although all parents love their children and give the best to them, they put too much pressure on their children. Some students think they will disappoint their parents if they are not admitted into a top school or university.

I think parents should have practical expectations of their children. This way, the children will feel more confident about themselves and really make a difference in the future.

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